If you’ve ever flown through your opening chapters only to hit the middle of your manuscript and think, oh no, it’s just… kind of sitting there, I want you to know two things:
You are not bad at this writing thing.
This happens to almost every single writer.
The middle of a manuscript is where energy takes a nap. The inciting incident has already happened, the ending feels far away, and suddenly every character is doing a lot of walking, talking, thinking, and processing.
The good news? A sagging middle is almost never about a lack of talent. It’s usually a structural or momentum issue—and those are fixable. Take it from me, a developmental editor who has helped hundreds of authors fix their sagging middles!
Here are seven ways to get your story moving again.
1. Re-center the want, not the plot
By the middle of a manuscript, writers often know what’s happening but have lost sight of why it matters right now.
Ask yourself:
What does my protagonist want in this section, specifically?
What are they actively trying to get today, not eventually?
If the answer is vague (“clarity,” “answers,” “closure”), the middle will feel vague too. Tighten the want. Make it concrete. Make it urgent. The pace and the plot will follow.
2. Cut the emotional recap (and let scenes do the work)
One of the most common middle problems I see as an editor is what I call emotional looping: characters thinking about the same thing over and over in slightly different language.
If your character has already:
Processed the betrayal
Reflected on the fallout
Remembered how this connects to their past
…it may be time to stop thinking and start doing.
When in doubt, trade a paragraph of reflection for:
A decision
A confrontation
A mistake
Movement creates meaning. Not the other way around.
3. Raise the cost of staying the same
A middle sags when nothing bad happens if the protagonist does nothing.
Look at the center of your book and ask:
What happens if my character doesn’t act here?
What are they risking by waiting?
If the answer is “not much,” that’s your problem. Add pressure. Add consequence. Make inaction hurt.
4. Give us a mini turn, not just filler events
The middle isn’t meant to tread water—it’s meant to turn the story.
A helpful trick: treat the middle like it needs its own arc.
A false win
A reveal that changes the game
A choice that quietly locks the ending into place
If scenes could be removed without affecting anything later, they’re probably filler—even if they’re well written. And some filler scenes are okay - especially if you’re writing some kind of literary manifesto - but readers today (and agents! and editors!) have short attention spans. Don’t give them a reason to put your book down.
5. Let things go wrong in new ways
Often the middle feels flat because the same problem keeps repeating.
If your character keeps:
Arguing with the same person
Avoiding the same truth
Failing in the same way
…try changing the failure mode.
Escalation isn’t about more drama—it’s about different pressure. Surprise yourself a little. The reader will feel it.
6. Check your time jumps and pacing
Sagging middles are frequently pacing issues in disguise.
Look for:
Too many summary paragraphs in a row
Big time jumps with no emotional anchor
Scenes that start late and end early every time
You may not need to cut pages—you may need to zoom in where it matters and move quickly through what doesn’t.
7. Remember: the middle is about transformation, not answers
The beginning asks a question.
The ending answers it.
The middle is where the character becomes someone capable of handling that answer.
If your middle feels off, ask:
How is my character changing here, even subtly?
What belief is being challenged?
What truth are they resisting?
When the internal shift is clear, the middle stops sagging and starts pulling.
If you’re stuck in the middle, please don’t panic-revise your opening or jump ahead to the ending out of despair. Or give up and just fall flat into a pint of ice cream. The middle is hard because it’s doing the heaviest lifting.
A sagging middle doesn’t mean your book is broken. It means your story is asking you for clarity and a little more pressure.
And if you’re reading this thinking, okay, but I still don’t know how to fix mine, that’s normal too. Middles are where manuscripts become books—with time, attention, and sometimes a second (or third or fourth or fifth) pass. Or even help from an editor like me!
Warmly,
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Let things go wrong in NEW ways is great advice! Read so many books where the entire middle is the same problem over and over again! The bobbing boat (same problem over and over) can be so frustrating for the reader.