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Meredith Rankin's avatar

Thank you, Kristen. For anyone on the fence about getting a developmental editor, let me share my story:

This is my seventh completed novel. (I have 3 or so first drafts of other manuscripts; I don't consider those completed!) I'd written around 7-8 drafts of this book, gotten feedback from multiple knowledgeable readers along the way, made substantial edits, and I knew it was a strong manuscript but I was hearing crickets from agents. (My query letter and synopsis had been through a similar process, too.)

The developmental editor agreed that it was a strong manuscript but not quite at the level to break into traditional publishing in my genre. There were definitely things that needed to be pointed out, things preventing my already-strong manuscript from breaking through. Now I'm doing the hard work of actually editing. I have no idea if I'll ever get a traditional book deal for this, but at least I'll know that I did my best.

So if you're at that stage where you've done everything you know to do, a developmental editor is worth paying for.

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Tracie Adams's avatar

This was concise and informative. Thank you!

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Voron Forest's avatar

“A developmental edit is a master class in writing. “ This is so true for me, and having my MS developmentally edited by a pro changed how I write.

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Quinn Columba Boyko| LadyQuinn's avatar

Love this! I've done the first two stages, but I worry a little if I should get help with a copyedit before querying more. As an ADHD author, I use a lot of whitespace and keep paragraphs short—sometimes I wonder if I 'should' make them longer, but I feel like this is part of my voice. (And I use a lot of em-dashes too. I did manage to keep the exclamation points just to appropriate dialogue, though!)

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Kristen Weber's avatar

Ideally, this is something one of your editors should tell you. I always tell my clients if they should get a copy edit to look over their ms before they submit. But most agents will overlook small mistakes.

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JP Pelosi's avatar

Really helpful Kristen! I think all levels of editing are useful, sometimes opening up new possibilities to writers that they may not have seen.

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Kristen Weber's avatar

Yes all helpful & different uses.

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Casual-T's avatar

My impostor syndrome tells me I need a developmental editor… Alas, my wallet tells me to just shut up and keep writing. Wonky finances aside, your insights are always appreciated, Kristen.

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Kristen Weber's avatar

Find friends who can help to start! They’re free.

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Toby Neal's avatar

Shared!

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The Crazy Cat Lady Writes's avatar

I had an editor who gave me a full edit (line/copy/dev) on about 10 short stories I had written. Since then, 3 of those stories are either published or due to be published later this year.

I cannot recommend enough in having a professional set of eyes to review your work.

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Kristen Weber's avatar

I’m so glad it turned out so great!

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Nicole Marcure's avatar

This was really helpful, especially the house analogy. I thought I kind of understood different editing stages, but it turns out I did not!

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Kristen Weber's avatar

No one does. Everyone wants a copy edit, but hardly anyone needs one for a long, long time.

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Vicki's avatar

I’m in the early processes of writing my first book, as well as revising a script. Thank you for this invaluable information!

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Charisse Flynn's avatar

Love the house analogy!

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Kristen Weber's avatar

Thanks!

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Chris Clarke's avatar

Thanks for sharing this information. I didn’t understand the nuances of the editing process before reading-that’s now corrected. 🔵 Chris

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Kristen Weber's avatar

I don’t do erotica. Just contemporary romance.

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Kristen Weber's avatar

So happy to help!

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Kristen Weber's avatar

Happy to help!

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Alison Wells-Dyck's avatar

When does it make sense to send your novel to Beta readers? After all 3 edits, during, or before?

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